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Why Your Nonprofit’s Message Isn’t Hitting Home (And How to Change That)

Makin - Public Relations PR Advice, Strategy

If you’ve ever felt your carefully crafted message is being brushed aside, you’re not alone. Many in the nonprofit sector have faced this challenge.

You’ve spent hours perfecting your mission statement, sharpening your social media posts, and painstakingly creating newsletters, only to see lacklustre engagement.

It’s not your passion or dedication that’s the problem. It’s how your message is landing (or not landing). What’s not working, and even more crucially, how can you address it?

You’re Speaking Martian

Here’s the hard truth: jargon doesn’t inspire. For instance, instead of using ‘food insecurity ‘, you could say ‘not having enough food to eat ‘. Acronyms, sector-specific language, or overly complex descriptions of your activities might be clear to you, but to the outside world, it’s as if you’re speaking Martian. Don’t just describe what you do; share why it matters. How is your work changing lives?

Take a moment to listen to how your audience talks about your cause and use their words. Do stories of individuals move them? Do they care about broad social change? Adjust your messaging to meet them where they are.

You’re Trying to Be Everything to Everyone

Nonprofits often try to appeal to all audiences: donors, beneficiaries, volunteers, policymakers, you name it. But here’s the thing: if you try to speak to everyone, you’ll connect with no one.

Focus your message. If you’re speaking to potential donors, explain how their contribution directly impacts the cause. If you’re reaching out to volunteers, highlight the personal growth and community connection they’ll gain.

Where’s the Emotion?

Humans are emotional creatures, and we connect through stories, not statistics. Yes, ‘10,000 meals served’ sounds impressive, but ‘Meet Sarah, who found hope and a warm meal when she needed it most’ is a story that can inspire action.

Tell the stories of the people whose lives you’ve touched. Show the human side of your nonprofit. People don’t support numbers; they support people.

Are You Listening, Really Listening?

Sometimes, we’re so focused on broadcasting our message that we need to remember to listen. What does your audience care about? What do they need from you.

Ask questions. Conduct surveys. Host focus groups. The insights you gain will not only help you refine your message but will also make your audience feel heard. A heard audience is a loyal one.

Consistency Is Key

Let’s say you’ve nailed your tone and tailored your message. Great! But are you delivering it consistently across all channels? If your website says one thing, your social media another, and your email newsletters a third, it’s no wonder your audience is confused.

Keep your brand voice and core message consistent everywhere. Think of it like singing in a choir: the harmony is magical when everyone’s on the same note.

Let’s Get Talking

Nonprofit leaders, the work you do changes the world. Your message deserves to resonate with those who can help you make that change. You can connect more deeply, inspire action, and see your mission thrive with a few adjustments. Your work is crucial, and by improving your messaging, you can reach more people and make an even greater impact.

Now it’s your turn. What challenges are you facing in getting your message across? Your experiences and insights are valuable. Are there strategies you’ve tried that worked or didn’t? 

I’d love to hear from you. Please share your thoughts in the comments below, and let’s keep the conversation going and learn from each other.

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